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"If you don't like something, change it. If you can't change it change your attitude"
-Maya Angelou
-Maya Angelou
Today’s blog post I’ve composed a scene from a moment in my past where I made a decision that had a negative impact on my life. To get a better understanding on how to do this I listened to a pod cast,
What You Don't Know (Lulu Wang). I going to kill this bitch!!! I scream out as I get into my car slamming the door so hard I thought the window glass would shatter. I’m a little dizzy I can feel it, but I’m also too enraged to just stop, breath, count to ten, and rationalize. It was a good day, like any other did my usual routine on Saturday. Clean the house, go the hair and nail salon hit the mall. In preparation for an epic night with my girls. We haven’t hung out together in a long time. I’m desperately looking forward to it. We all have our own lives that are moving fast work, school, being mothers, trying to maintain healthy relationship it can be a lot to juggle. Whenever we get a chance to hang out we make the most of it. Excitedly I head home to get ready. Laying out my outfit I say to myself, “Yeah girllllll you’re going to kill it tonight”. Its all about the shoes they are going to set this outfit off just right. My phone begins to ring as I set out of the shower, Its Blair. “Hey girlllll” I squeal dramatically. “Are you almost ready because you know we have to pick up Lisa, hit The liquor store and take a few fire flicks before we head to the club”. I ramble off. “Danielle, Danielle, Danielle slow down your talking too fast” She says. “I’m actually calling to cancel sorry it’s so last minute my baby sitter canceled” she says sadly. “Ugh” I let out a deep breath. “I’m so glad I don’t have kids” I say while rolling my eye up to the ceiling and beyond. “So, I guess it’s just Lisa and me, you know I don’t really like Lisa. I say with much attitude. Blair says “O yeah she back out too she knows you don’t like her that much”. We say our good byes and promise we will try this again in two weeks. At this point I should be putting on pajamas and picking out a good movie to watch until I doze off, Right! Wrong I continue to get dressed leave stop at the liquor store Patron of course and head to the club drinking all the way. The club had a nice vibe music was good all in all I happy I came. I saw a few familiar faces have a light convos moving throughout the crowd. Suddenly a fight breaks out that im not sure how I became apart of next thing I know Im being dragged out be security. I’m pissed off to say the least vision and thoughts cloudy as I make it back to my car trying to piece together what just happened the only thing I remember is the girl in the pink dress throwing a drink in my face. I pull out the parking spot put my car in reverse. Yelling “ill catch her out front” “I’m going to kill this Bitch”. I slam on the break and it all goes to shit! Reversing I hit nine cars, one being a cop car. The cop swings open my driver door yanks me out slaps the cuffs on me hauls me off to jail. All I wanted to do was have a good time but too much drinking landed me in jail with a DUI.
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Sabatino
9/30/2018 03:49:43 pm
This post provides description, action, and dialogue to build a narrative. This reads like the beginnings of a longer narrative. If you choose this topic to develop in your formal project, we can discuss ways to flesh out the scenes.
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Nymahlee Zoryeah
10/1/2018 05:12:19 pm
Aw man, at least your safe. I loved your story and you compose such detail.
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Taylor Dannaker
10/1/2018 06:18:09 pm
I was not expecting the ending resulting in you hitting 9 cars! at least you are safe and nothing worse happened.
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Colin
10/1/2018 06:28:57 pm
The begining words of the blog grabbed me in to read It again.
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Qaadir.M
10/4/2018 03:52:40 pm
Intro definitely caught my attention! Crazy that a night of fun gets ruined so quick though. Who knows, maybe the chick who threw the drink in your face owned one of the 9 cars.
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