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"If you don't like something, change it. If you can't change it change your attitude"
-Maya Angelou
-Maya Angelou
In this bog i will be using clips, words, and descriptive details from my Narrative Project to create a found poem about my cycle of love. Using | Sample Found Poem | Visual Examples of Found Poems as guides to help me develop my idea. I scream out, desperately looking forward to healthy relationship it sparkles like the sky on a clear night and all you can see is the stars I don’t wait, I can conceal the contents I enter standing off to the side to survey colors lights dancing vibrant the face couldn’t see pulling me closer This is what I came for night of no thinking or worrying Mr. Handsome takes my hand Who is this man Why is any of this happening Why is my vision so blurry These are all the questions shuffling through my mind like a deck of cards vision and thoughts cloudy dazed and confused collided with my better judgement Do you think the narrative provides enough descriptive language to create a compelling found poem
- Yes, My Narrative provides enough description for the type of poem I wanted to create. Do you think the descriptive language more so creates a setting or delivers the subtext of a theme? -My theme was confusion of love/ relationships i feel that i was able to capture that. In revision, will you focus on using description to develop more of the setting or more of a theme? -I would probably try to focus more on the ending of my love cycle. If not, how do you plan to revise the descriptive language in the narrative?
3 Comments
10/21/2018 11:17:42 am
I strongly feel the love theme on your found poem. I enjoyed reading it.
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Sabatino
10/22/2018 11:12:57 am
I agree with Velisia about the strength of the theme in this found poem. I notice the found poem is presented in paragraph form with very little punctuation. At times, a writer will eliminate punctuation and use longer sentences to create a stream of consciousness style of writing that allows the readers to enter into the thoughts of the writer. Was this your intention?
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Anne Marie Bruce
10/22/2018 12:55:22 pm
The theme and description are really well composed.
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